As you know (because you read it) I recently posted a short story that I rewrote from memory. While 17 years of writing has probably taken some of the edges off it, I'm annoyed by the last line. I don't think it's as good as what I originally wrote - though I can't quite clearly remember what it was.
That being the case, I'm going to edit it a few times to see what works. The story will still live here, it'll just be different the next time you read it.
Just sharing the process. Well, my process.